Monday, 16 April 2018

Some of Our ANZAC Poems


15 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Lorenzo im from owairaka school. I like your poem's they are cool and keep up the good work thank you for posting it. If yous want to visit my learning visit my blog https://odslorenzos.blogspot.co.nz/

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    1. Kia ora Lorenzo thank you for your positive comment. We will be sure to have a look at your blog.

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  2. HI we are from Owairaka primary school.Are names are apii and Daniel.WE really love your anzac presentation.I just got one Question Daniel and me got do you have manaakitanga in you school?

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  3. Hi are names is Daniel and Appi we are from Owairaka primary school we like your writing about ANZAC poems Next time you should try using some fullstops in probably 2 poems . if you would like to see my blog please write this down http://odsdanielm.blogspot.co.nz/ thank you I injoyed your poems .

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    1. Kia ora Daniel and Appi thank you for your positive and thoughtful comment. We will definitely look at your blogs.

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  4. hi my name is nadir i like the writing and your stuff you made it is lit and bye

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  5. Kia ora, We're Te Ropu Manawaroa from Gilberthorpe School. I loved your ANZAC Poems, because we have talked about the different ways we spent ANZAC Day in our class. You brought me back to when we did ANZAC. Maybe you could tell a little bit more about how you all spent ANZAC Day in Greymouth.

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    1. Kia ora Ms Raisin thank you for your positive and thoughtful comment. Through our learning around ANZAC we found out that most of us had family members past and present that have been in or affected by war. One students, Jack, wore his G Grandad's medals to ANZAC Day.

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  6. Kia ora i'm Azire From Girlberthope school i loved the way your talking about ANZAC Did you think about take a photo of who your talking about bey

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  7. Hi its Kade thank you for the comment I will do it next time.

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  8. Hi my name is Taylah I am a student in room 6 at Owairaka I really like your poems they are very descriptive and intresting maybe next time use more big words and full stops if you would like to see my blog here it is https://odstaylah-anet.blogspot.co.nz/.

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  9. Hi Taylah. Thank you for your helpful comment. Maybe next time I will use bigger words and full stops. From Porsha.

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  10. Hi Taylah. Thank you for your helpful comment. Maybe next time I will use bigger words and full stops. From Porsha.

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  11. Hi my name is Ivan i like how the poems are described.By the way my big brother is called Isaac and he likes world war stuff

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  12. Kia Ora,my name is Hibo and I'm from Room 18 at Owairaka District School.I really like your blog post about how you did poems about the world war.I remember we had to do this when it was world war day and we had to like write stuff about this.Maybe next you should put more full stops and more capital letters.Thanks for sharing your learning.You should check out my blog http://odshibom.blogspot.co.nz/
    Blog you later,
    {Hibo}

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.