Monday, 9 April 2018
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We have had a fantastic time writing using simile, metaphor and alliteration. We have written a number of poems. Some about what we heard outside our classroom and some we found in pages of texts. We then wrote a short poem about ourselves for our partner school. These were sent away last week to Manukau, Aukland. We are looking forward to receiving their work in the near future. Thank you School Kit and The Warehouse for providing this unit of work and some resources for us to use. We have really enjoyed it. Here are some photos of some of our work in progress and completed on our classroom wall.
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i like the poems that you made
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Lorenzo from Owairaka school. I like your poem's Ruma Rima keep it up with the hard work you've been doing. If you want to see my learning go to https://odslorenzos.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteThank you Lorenzo. Have a great holiday break and we will look at your blog next term.
DeleteHi my name is Rekshan from Owairaka school. I like the colourful background and the island is very cool.Next time i think you should change the shark and the crab to not be cartoon like.
ReplyDeleteKia ora My name is Hibo from owairaka school.I like these poems its really cool and nice.Next time It think next you should put like some animation or something else.If you would like to see my blog here it ishttp://odshibom.blogspot.co.nz/ my blog has nothing much sorry :hibo :to ruma rima school
ReplyDeleteTalofa, Hi my name is Taylah from owairaka school in room 6 i like the the colourful backgrounds and the rhyming in the poems think of putting bigger words in your poems next time. If you want to visit my blog here it is https://odstaylah-anet.blogspot.co.nz/
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