Kia ora and thank you for visiting our class blog. We are a class of Year 5/6 students at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand. Our teacher is Mrs Barrow.
Kia Ora my name is Elly and I am a year six student from Paparore School and I love this poem and how descriptive it is. I have always loved everything about the Tasman Sea. do you love thee Tasman Sea also?
KIA Ora my name is Jasmine and I am a year 6 student from Paparore School I think this post is very creative and this is a very descriptive and relaxing to read. But maybe you could of added a little bit more because I really wanted to read more but apart from that I love this post. have you ever been to the Tasman sea before?.
Kia Ora. This poem is inspirational. Here is something that you can work on. Like change the font and color to make it read a bill. This reminds me about cape Reinga. And maybe add some more information.
Kia Ora im Kobe im from paparore school I think this poem its very creative just the starting of this poem got me keep reading i love his poem whats your fav kinda poem?
I loved this post a lot . It was very inspirational and heart warming :).
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Manaia and I love this post. The words written on it feels very inspirational. I love it.
ReplyDeleteAloha my name is serenade from paparore school this post is so inspirational
ReplyDeletekia ora your guys sea looks much lighter then the tasmen sea up north
ReplyDeleteKia Ora my name is Elly and I am a year six student from Paparore School and I love this poem and how descriptive it is. I have always loved everything about the Tasman Sea. do you love thee Tasman Sea also?
ReplyDeleteGreat poem and good choice of words,the one thing that could make this poem incredible is to just add in a bit more writing.
ReplyDeleteKIA Ora my name is Jasmine and I am a year 6 student from Paparore School
ReplyDeleteI think this post is very creative and this is a very descriptive and relaxing to read. But maybe you could of added a little bit more because I really wanted to read more but apart from that I love this post. have you ever been to the Tasman sea before?.
Kia Ora. This poem is inspirational. Here is something that you can work on. Like change the font and color to make it read a bill. This reminds me about cape Reinga. And maybe add some more information.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora im Kobe im from paparore school I think this poem its very creative just the starting of this poem got me keep reading i love his poem whats your fav kinda poem?
ReplyDeleteWow that is so heartwarming
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Frano I love your poem is so crative and cool I could read them all day.
ReplyDeleteI have might of posted a comment here but i will post again, i like how it says crashing grey, that's what I love about this.
ReplyDeleteWow what an amazing poster I love the beach its my favourite place to relax and take my dogs to the beach cant wait to see more great job.
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