Kia ora and thank you for visiting our class blog. We are a class of Year 5/6 students at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand. Our teacher is Mrs Barrow.
I am learning to include visual information in my writing including images, graphs and charts.
I am learning to organise my text into basic paragraphs.
Kiaora Ruma Rima, I think Emma did a wonderful job. She explain how kiwis are endangered and added alot of information!. we did something similar last year when we did reports on our fuzzy kiwi and its dangers.
I never knew that there were different types of kiwi. I really love your slide though. I love how you labelled the different slides and added pictures to show what you mean. I have nothing to say that isn't positive. Thank you Emma for sharing this onto your blog. 3 likes for you! :)
Hello Emma my name is Leah I am a year 6 and I go to Paparore school I really like the way you told us about the endangered species of the white / Brown Kiwi. I thought it was very nice but it's sad because you know Kiwis are like endangered in 4 years time I'll be like dead I think you could work on maybe adding a bit more sentences on your work. But other than that it's really good😉
Hey Emma, the slide is really cool I think it's great that you made a slide about endangered animals so people are more aware of what is happening around them.I love your post but I think you're a bit repetitive in your writing when you keep saying. I suggest that you use some different words like maybe the Maori word for kiwi or flightless bird. Did you enjoy making it? 😄😍🙈
Very interesting facts about the kiwi.I've done something like this as well before but your one is brilliant (also good choice of pictures).And one more thing great choice of words.
Hey Emma my name is Manaia and I go to a school called Paparore. I think this post is awesome. I like how you explained the kiwi very clearly and I think you did a great wait did I say great I mean out standing.
Wow it is really interesting to know that there are other types of kiwi. I really like how you named all of your slides. I like how you told us that Kiwis are endangered I think you could have added a little bit more other wise it was incredible.
Kiaora Ruma Rima, I think Emma did a wonderful job. She explain how kiwis are endangered and added alot of information!. we did something similar last year when we did reports on our fuzzy kiwi and its dangers.
ReplyDeleteI never knew that there were different types of kiwi. I really love your slide though. I love how you labelled the different slides and added pictures to show what you mean. I have nothing to say that isn't positive. Thank you Emma for sharing this onto your blog. 3 likes for you! :)
ReplyDeleteHello Emma my name is Leah I am a year 6 and I go to Paparore school I really like the way you told us about the endangered species of the white / Brown Kiwi. I thought it was very nice but it's sad because you know Kiwis are like endangered in 4 years time I'll be like dead I think you could work on maybe adding a bit more sentences on your work. But other than that it's really good😉
ReplyDeleteP.S did you enjoy doing it?
ReplyDeleteHey Emma, the slide is really cool I think it's great that you made a slide about endangered animals so people are more aware of what is happening around them.I love your post but I think you're a bit repetitive in your writing when you keep saying. I suggest that you use some different words like maybe the Maori word for kiwi or flightless bird. Did you enjoy making it? 😄😍🙈
ReplyDeleteVery interesting facts about the kiwi.I've done something like this as well
ReplyDeletebefore but your one is brilliant (also good choice of pictures).And one more thing great choice of words.
Hey Emma my name is Manaia and I go to a school called Paparore. I think this post is awesome. I like how you explained the kiwi very clearly and I think you did a great wait did I say great I mean out standing.
ReplyDeleteWow it is really interesting to know that there are other types of kiwi. I really like how you named all of your slides. I like how you told us that Kiwis are endangered I think you could have added a little bit more other wise it was incredible.
ReplyDeleteI like how you told us where we can find kiwi's. But on the second slide you could have given more info about white kiwi's
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