Monday, 5 November 2018

Descriptive Writing by Indi (moving into Narrative)

2 comments:

  1. I love this description Indi. Such good imagination and all your similes really made me picture exactly what was happening. I love the one about the sun burning his face like paper in a fire. I wonder if you can think of another term other than lower limb so you don't repeat it a few times? Great description! From Mum

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  2. Hi Mum, Indi here. Thank you for commenting on my blog post! I was trying to think of another word for lower limb but I couldn't. Thanks again.

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