Video Prompt Writing
WALT support our ideas with detail
WALT use a range of written features to engage the audience (simile, metaphor, alliteration)
WALT use some complex sentences to create pace, flow and interest.
WALT include commas for lists, exclamation marks, question marks and speech marks in our writing.
Ooh. That's cool. I try to add punctuation to everything. I'm paige from Paparore school class Te kauru and My teacher is Mrs davan. I really love your post about how you write. I look forward to learning about your class and hope you have a lovely day.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora paige. my name is cameron. Thanks can't wait to see same of your new posts.
DeleteWhat else do you do for learning?
ReplyDeleteWOW! your writing was awesome! i felt like i was there.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Layton. I am a student from Paparore school I was surprised by how much you have written on Ormie the pig. I love the elabaration and how you have capital letters in the right spots. By the way when you made the story was it the original or was it the same idea but in different sentences?. I can't wait to get back to hearing from you guys.Bye!!.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Molly thank you for commenting. I really enjoyed writing about Ormie the Pig. We wrote about what happened in the video to Ormie. The funniest part was when he fell through all of the boxes. I can't wait to see some of your learning.
DeleteKia ora my name is Karmi. We watched a little video of Ormie the Pig.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see what you have written about your story. Bye!!!
Hi I am Harper, I am glad you liked me and Mahias Ormie The Pig writing.
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing about ormie the pig just reading this makes me hungry also I liked how you described the food.
ReplyDeleteHi im Frano I go to Paparore School. I like ormie the pig. this makes me hangrey.
ReplyDelete